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      08-13-2010, 10:45 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by Autosavant View Post
please share your thoughts.
You need to proofread it one more time. A couple of awkward sentences and some missing punctuation.

Otherwise, it seemed well written and easy to read.

Cute kid.
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